those fart are a bit out of tone
whe all do thats why whe are here for your beat is a bit to slow for you melody if it helps not mutch just a litle
your snare is placed rong ...|...|..|.|... or something in that way it does not realy make it flow i think its best you removed that one or place the 2 hits a bit further
Thanks for the input I will work on it.
nice guitar realy stupid voice or maby its just not my style bud i like nice rifts.
sounds good i would love to hear more.
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